There is certainly a case to be made for short letters, but you can be too short.

Your letter make up is the same each time, its basically -

[i][b]To X

I like X and X and X, and X is really cool!

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Can you sign my photos please?

From mileycyrusfan[/b][/i]

Thats it, it just seems far to brief and to the point, and doesnt come across as a fan letter to me, it just looks like a generic letter template has been used (which to a degree, it has), and some celebs will pick up on this. Obviously some will respond, it just depends I guess. It seems more celebs are starting to have their letters screened, and if they dont look legit they dont get anything.

And I've mentioned this about 50 times to you before, but I'd assume the spelling/grammer is corrected before sending? :razz:

[color=#400000]Oh right thanks, I dont think short letters are rude either, maybe the celebrity might prefer them as they dont have to spend more time reading them :lol: [/color][/quote]

well thanks, its easier for both the celeb and fan i think. i mean if you think about it, you cant list everything the celeb has done then it will seem like you just copied their imdb page and posted it.

[quote="RYAN J."][quote="ROB123"]Chelsea :? Who???, anyways glad i could help {thumb2} [/color][/quote]

Chelsea Staub. Actress who plays on the Disney Channel. {thumb2}

RYAN J. 8)[/quote]

[color=#400000]Oh right thanks, I dont think short letters are rude either, maybe the celebrity might prefer them as they dont have to spend more time reading them :lol: [/color]

well im not trying to be rude i say please alot and thanks alot. and yes im only 15 in reality, and im not going to write mrs.swift shes only 19 im sure she doesent wanna be called mrs., i figured its polite to write call june foray mrs because shes 91 and bobby thomson mr because hes in his eighties. also i did edit some of the letters so ya

I may be wrong, especially as Im quite new to this, but I think it depends how old you are. I'm presuming you're not very old, and the celebrities would be able to tell this too and take it into consideration. I think maybe the celebs are kinder to younger fans.

One thing I picked up on (I don't know if anyone else mentioned) it is that you're writing Dear Taylor Swift. I think I would write Dear Taylor, or Dear Ms Swift (if its a girl - I don't even know!!) Its just sounds a bit strange to have both names!

They seem too short, too abrupt/rude, and full of spelling/grammar errors.

[quote="ROB123"]Chelsea :? Who???, anyways glad i could help {thumb2} [/color][/quote]

Chelsea Staub. Actress who plays on the Disney Channel. {thumb2}

RYAN J. 8)

[quote="miley cyrus fan"]thanks for the critism guys lol, i dont wanna get personal because i dont feel theirs a need a celeb doesent wanna here about me. and i will the change a some of the things you corrected me on because yall make some good points. and btw i do talk to chelsea on myspace so shes knows about me already and knows who i am. i just talked to her right now lol we have the same favirote basketball player that is really cool.[/quote]
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Chelsea :? Who???, anyways glad i could help {thumb2} [/color]

thanks for the critism guys lol, i dont wanna get personal because i dont feel theirs a need a celeb doesent wanna here about me. and i will the change a some of the things you corrected me on because yall make some good points. and btw i do talk to chelsea on myspace so shes knows about me already and knows who i am. i just talked to her right now lol we have the same favirote basketball player that is really cool.

A Thing that I do with my letters is tell the celeb a little about myself. Here's an example of what I write (Names & locations are just fictional):

[b]Daniel,

Hi! My name is Rick Johnson. I'm 19 & I live in Mt. Pleasant, MI. Some of my favorite hobbies include: Part-Time Graphic Designer (Custom Photos & artwork), Watching Movies, Listening to my MP3/I-pod, Skateboarding and Hanging out with my Family and Friends![/b]


See? That way the celebs knows a little about you and what you like. Then you can go into mentioning that there a Great Actor/Actress and the films you've liked them in ect. & at the very end politley ask for them to sign your photos. :D

Hope this helps! {thumb2}

RYAN J. 8)