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Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by RuleroftheWorld » Tue Oct 29, 2019 3:18 am

Add more about the celeb, why you like them, add other stuff.

Right now your letter is basically

Hi
I'am a big fan of yours
question 1
question 2
question 3
can I have your autograph
from a big fan

Using the yout letter to Michael Buble as an example, 99% of the letter is non-specific to him. It looks like a generic letter that you could send to any singer, and I have no doubt thats what the celeb would think when they read it too.

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by miley cyrus fan » Mon Sep 03, 2007 11:49 pm

margotchanning wrote:No offence intended here but do you write your letters in shorthand like you write on the forum?

I mean do you write "em" instead of "them" and "fav" instead of "favourite"? As this may impair your success rate. The letters will look rushed and the celebrity might think you haven't taken much effort over them.

It's just an opinion but I personally would not respond to a letter that was written in txt tlk.
alrite i will correct the puncation and so on but what else should be added i wrote a few letters out before only sent one set(was going to send a few months back but some of the adresses would have been good for preprints only so i am sending friday or sunday or atleast packaging em)

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by margotchanning » Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:40 pm

No offence intended here but do you write your letters in shorthand like you write on the forum?

I mean do you write "em" instead of "them" and "fav" instead of "favourite"? As this may impair your success rate. The letters will look rushed and the celebrity might think you haven't taken much effort over them.

It's just an opinion but I personally would not respond to a letter that was written in txt tlk.

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by miley cyrus fan » Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:00 pm

Peyton L. wrote:
Nammzi wrote:I think that you should write "Favourite" instead of Fav, and also, what do you mean when you say:

"I loved what I like about you"?
"What I like About You" is a tv show starring Amanda Bynes.

And what everybody else said, They are too short.
alrite i always thought short was better but ive only sent 5 letters in my ttm collecting and only recived one succes i got a rts on one too but ya, can i have any thing that would be good to add thats usualy how i do my letter list my favirote work of theirs tell em i am a huge fan then write a few questeions

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by Peyton » Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:10 pm

Nammzi wrote:I think that you should write "Favourite" instead of Fav, and also, what do you mean when you say:

"I loved what I like about you"?
"What I like About You" is a tv show starring Amanda Bynes.

And what everybody else said, They are too short.

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by margotchanning » Mon Sep 03, 2007 8:23 pm

I agree that the letters should be longer and you should try and mention a favourite memory of that celebrity like a scene from a movie or tv show that the celebrity has appeared in to prove that you didn't just IMDB their name. {thumb2}

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by miley cyrus fan » Mon Sep 03, 2007 7:55 pm

automusicgraph wrote:
Andy316 wrote:My opinion -

Those letters are all far too short. They look basic and brief, and to me, if I was a celeb, I would assume they came from a dealer looking to get autos to sell, or someone who's just trying to get a free auto. If I was the celeb, I wouldnt reply. They're too short, too basic, and look too much like mass produced letters.

Just my opinion, don't jump all over me for saying it.
I agree, tell a little more about how you like them, and show that you a real fan (if you are!). Also, there are many typos...
alrite but i they should be brief not super long anyway and the typos will be fixed and i am fans of all of em

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by automusicgraph » Mon Sep 03, 2007 7:49 pm

Andy316 wrote:My opinion -

Those letters are all far too short. They look basic and brief, and to me, if I was a celeb, I would assume they came from a dealer looking to get autos to sell, or someone who's just trying to get a free auto. If I was the celeb, I wouldnt reply. They're too short, too basic, and look too much like mass produced letters.

Just my opinion, don't jump all over me for saying it.
I agree, tell a little more about how you like them, and show that you a real fan (if you are!). Also, there are many typos...

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by Nammzi » Mon Sep 03, 2007 7:07 pm

I think that you should write "Favourite" instead of Fav, and also, what do you mean when you say:

"I loved what I like about you"?

Re: here are my newest set of letter feel free to make correctio

by Pat93 » Mon Sep 03, 2007 1:27 pm

Hi,
if I were you I wouldn't always write their name,
eg:instead of dear Bruce Springsteen
I would say dear Mr Springsteen

But everyone has another opinion....

kind regards,Patrick

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